are these good rap lyrics?

i aint stoppin now ill just keep on goin,ill throw money in da air and
make it
look like its snowin,ive been told im creative,and trust me ive been
hated,its
my time and and for a long time ive waited,i dont cut myself but i
still bleed,
yea that money in my life is all i need,i sure aint for da crips im
always
for my bloodz,cuz i sure aint followin none of them dudz,im bout to
get a
record deal and man its excitin,im like shane carwin im always
fightin,ima
champion baby like da packers,man i do this all the time i aint a
slacker,im
a soldier i fight for my right,im look for that star thats bright,fly
a
mutlti colerd kite this is my first i dont care what people think,cuz
half of them
probably stink,ya know its
time to do what i like,time to step to not the left but the right,its
time i
take a stand,shake a hand,and become a strong man,im only 13 ive got
alot to
come,maybe one day i will have my own son,he can take after me,bein
good,man
thats what i think he should, my dad more than likely would,i always
do it big and im never
stoppin,you already know im holdin on to that pistol grip,watch me
spit,you aint
nutin but a funny lookin hypocrite,man im so dope make ya jaw drop,im
like a
fire cracker yea i pop,i live in the country not the city,man i think
this
place is much more pretty,i get picked on and made fun of,but i dont
worry bout
that cuz,my life so good,just like urs would,if i knew my daddy then
he would
say it should,my life so good,just like urs would,if i knew my daddy
then he
would say it should,yep back in the day those were the times,when the
only thing
you had to do was rhyme